Bring your manuscript to life with expert editorial guidance that respects your voice and elevates your story.
Editing, Proofreading & MS Prep/ Tidying
Whether you're working on a novel, short story, or nonfiction narrative, our editing services are designed to meet you where you are—from early story structure to final polish. Choose the level of editing that matches your manuscript’s stage and your publishing goals.
Developmental editing (Early-stage drafts or major revisions) is the big-picture phase of editing. It focuses on the overall structure, content, and storytelling of a manuscript—looking at plot, pacing, character development, theme, tone, and flow. This type of editing helps shape the story at its core, often involving deep revisions, rearranging sections, or expanding ideas to make the work more compelling, coherent, and impactful. It’s especially valuable for early drafts and authors looking to strengthen their book’s foundation.
What’s included:
In-depth feedback on plot, pacing, and narrative flow
Analysis of character development and arcs
Chapter structure & story cohesion review
Tone, theme, and voice consistency
Written editorial report + margin notes
Pricing: $0.04–$0.06 per word
Example: 60,000-word novel = $2,400 – $3,600
Includes one follow-up consultation and a free 30-minute strategy call.
For mid-stage drafts needing style and flow improvements.
Refine your manuscript at the sentence level—improving flow, clarity, and style without altering your voice. I’ll polish your prose, tighten language, and ensure your story reads smoothly and professionally. Ideal for writers who want a cleaner, more compelling narrative before final copyediting. Sentence-level editing that enhances clarity, voice, and rhythm—without losing your tone.
What’s included:
Sentence-by-sentence editing for flow and readability
Refinement of tone, voice, and narrative style
Eliminating awkward phrasing, redundancies, and wordiness
Paragraph restructuring for clarity and rhythm
Light fact-checking and consistency across the manuscript
Ideal for: Authors with a completed draft looking to elevate their storytelling and prose quality without changing the core structure.
Pricing: $0.035–$0.05 per word
Example: 60,000-word novel = $2,100 – $3,000
Developmental & Structural Editing
Substantive & Line Editing
Copyediting is the process of reviewing and correcting a manuscript to ensure accuracy, clarity, consistency, and style. It focuses on grammar, punctuation, spelling, syntax, word usage, and adherence to a style guide (like Chicago Manual of Style or APA). A copyeditor also checks for internal consistency—like character names, dates, and facts—ensuring the writing flows smoothly and reads professionally..
What’s included:
Grammar, punctuation, and spelling corrections
Sentence structure and clarity improvements
Consistency checks (style, terminology, formatting)
Adherence to your chosen style guide
Final proof of all content (excluding in-depth rewrites)
Pricing: $0.025–$0.03/word
Example: 60,000 words = $1,500 – $1,800
Includes a final proof and one round of revision if needed. Polish your manuscript to perfection with error-free, consistent writing.
Proofreading is the final stage of the editing process. It involves carefully reviewing the text to catch and correct spelling errors, punctuation mistakes, typos, formatting issues, and minor grammar problems. Unlike deeper editing, proofreading doesn't change the structure or content—it ensures the document is clean, polished, and ready for publication.
Your book deserves to be error-free and easy to read. Polish your book before publishing with professional proofreading. Whether you’re self-publishing or preparing for a publisher, my professional proofreading services ensure that your manuscript is polished and publication-ready.
What I Offer
Basic Proofreading ($0.01 – $0.015 per word)
In-depth feedback on plot, pacing, and narrative flow
Analysis of character development and arcs
Spelling, grammar, and punctuation corrections
Consistency in formatting (italics, capitalization, etc.No major rewriting—just a clean, error-free manuscript
Advanced Proofreading ($0.015 – $0.025 per word)
In-depth feedback on plot, pacing, and narrative flow
Analysis of character development and arcs
Everything in Basic Proofreading
Minor sentence restructuring for clarity
Fixing awkward phrasing
Book Proofreading Package (for full manuscripts)
Full manuscript polish
Formatting consistency (chapter titles, headers, spacing)
Proofreading before book design
Bundle & Save on Proofreading + Book Design
Combine editing and design services for a seamless publishing experience—and enjoy discounted rates when you book both!
🔹 Proofreading + Interior Formatting → Save 10% on the total package
🔹 Proofreading + Cover Design + Formatting → Save 15% on the full bundle
Get your manuscript polished and professionally designed—all in one place.
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As an author, editor, and designer, I know story from every angle. I don’t just polish your book—I help it shine with clarity, voice, and purpose. Insightful edits. Honest feedback. Creative partnership. Every word counts.
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Bio
Prior to becoming a novelist, Okang'a Ooko was the award-winning artist and well-rounded designer in Nairobi's creative, branding, print and publishing industry. He was born in Rusinga Island, Lake Victoria, in Kenya and grew up in the 70s and 80s in Kisumu. He graduated from the Technical University in Kenya where he studied graphic design and communication. He later studied product design at the Housing and Building Research Institut at Wageningen University and worked extensively as a product development designer in the SME sector. His stories mostly feature ordinary men and women struggling to succeed in the new African renaissance. In his works are vivid scenes of Kenyan domestic life. Read more »
Ready to transform your story into something unforgettable? As an experienced graphic designer who designs beautiful books, Okang'a Ooko specializes in end-to-end creative solutions for authors, publishers, content creators, and storytellers. Whether you're crafting your first novel, launching a brand, or building an author platform, he's here to guide you from concept to creation. Learn more »
This is more than just a service—it’s a creative partnership grounded in decades of storytelling, publishing, and visual design expertise. Ooko helps you bring your book, brand, or message to life—beautifully, strategically.
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